Catie, I've really enjoyed reading your first two freewrites! I can definitely see a theme emerging that I might want to assign an essay on. (Hint - it has to do with YouTube!) What you have so far is helping me identify strengths and weaknesses in your causal writing. Organization is a definite strength!
Keep them coming, and I'm sorry it took so long for me to get this feedback up. I'm still learning to use this Blogger app from my phone, but things should start to get smoother and smoother. Don't forget to practice vocab. The words may seem like odd ones to learn, but they are on every college entrance exam there is for some reason.
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